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Tuesday, April 7, 2020

Fireworks at the park

In the weekend I wrote about my cousin Max and me going to the park at night time.  We went there to see the fireworks. 
Whats  your  favorite part about the story? Whats your favorite park?
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 7, 2020 at 5:23 PM

    Hello Geoff I liked your story it sounded pretty fun did you ride the ferris wheel and did it cost money to ride on it. my favorite part of the blog was the part when the fireworks started it sounded really fun!

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  2. AnonymousApril 7, 2020 at 5:49 PM

    Thank you for the nice comment Gabrielle. I didn't ride on the ferris wheel and I think it did cost money. Yes it was really fun when the fireworks started :)

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  3. UnknownApril 9, 2020 at 3:19 PM

    Hi Geoff
    It sounds like a great night. My favourite part of the story was when you described the night as cool awesome and fun!
    What type of food was there and did you have any?

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  4. Michelle WrightApril 15, 2020 at 7:30 PM

    Hi Geoff,
    How exciting going to the park to watch fireworks. I really like that you told us the fireworks sounded very loud. When I was little, the noise of fireworks scared me.
    My favourite park is Hayley Park, it is great size to walk around.
    Do you think you will go to the fireworks again this year?

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