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Friday, September 10, 2021

The old man and his animal friends sailing

 The old man and his animal friends sailing


An old man with a long beard and his animal friends were sailing. Suddenly a flood came and washed the boat high up in the air. Then they continued sailing looking for shore.  But the water became  higher and higher. The animals looked down in the water. The old man said do not panic, he said in a cold shaking voice. The frogs and toads hopped and leaped and loudly croaked for help. Some animals scratch the wooden boat and some were running on the boat.The boat started cracking, the boat had cracks every where.The boat was being filled with water that was splashing on the animals and the old man. The boat fell on its back and some of the animals fell in the water. Because the boat was slowly moving around, the old man was trying to control it by  paddling the boat. Some animals helped, some thought there was nothing they can do because part of the boat had sunk.They let a bird to fly to find land and the bird came back with a fern in its beak. The old man was thinking about the fern that there was land near by. The man found green grass and some shiny yellow sand from far away. The animals and the old man stepped on the hot smooth sand and walk on the dark green bushy grass.  The animals found food because there were fruit trees. Apples, pears, and oranges are everywhere. The old man and the animals found a new home. 

The end.


4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Geoff
    This is an interesting story Geoff - I see you have a couple of good sentence starters. It would be great to see some different ones added. I am pleased the old man and the animals found a new home.
    Miss Gill.

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  2. Good work Geoff! Keep up the good work and one day you will be able to write Books!

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  3. Geoff This is so AMAZING that is so mach work i bet i cod not do this mach work.

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  4. WOW! Geoff your Writing is AMAZING Good Jod

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